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use it or lose it (the memory)



like a circular track
with two runaway trains
will eventually collide
i will wait for the impact

of you
coming again

memories fade
if you do not play back
the times
that made you
or broke you
will haunt you
until

sit down
rewind
remember

wedding days
birthdays
saturdays
anyday




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play back : prompt : 40-50 words

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  • you nailed this propmt i think it is personally gold hon best wishes in the contest you nailed it


  • Purush
    May 1, 2008

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    All the best in my contest

    short and smart
    All the best in my contest
    sit down
    rewind
    remember

    wedding days
    birthdays
    saturdays
    anyday