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Alive Among the Past

Exit darkness, enter light,
Rouse from dream, escape the night,
Continue life as mean to be,
Notice what you cannot see,
Press forward from day to day
From play to work and work to play,
On and on the hours pass
As sunlight through the hourglass,
Never forgetting time since gone
Though time since then seems not too long,
Exit daylight, enter night,
Escape the day, escape the fight

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  • Dead Embrace
    May 18, 2008

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    Amazing

    WOW I am speechless! This is a talented piece that you've written here my friend I must say I wish I could write as good as you. It's right in depth with a powerful meaning, so dark I love it
    take carex