Tender Leaf
Carried swiftly by
Automn Lights
Author notes
It's one of only five Hiaku I've written, so I hope it's alright.
A contest entry
- I love Autumn and I am giving many points to the one who will make me love it even more. by Loveandblessings2u.
700 points, ended September 12, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short poems about the Autumn Season by The Fun House.
950 points, ended November 2, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very nicely done Haiku. It breathe autumn. One small thing, you've misspelled autumn, but I don't count against that
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CUTE, SHORT AND ABOUT AS LOVELY AS CAN BE.
i LOVE HOW YOU SO PACKED SO MUCH PACK\
SO MUCH INTO THIS, AMAZING WRITR
lOVEANDBLESSINGS2U YOU AND YOUR ALWAYD
jOUCE
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ah those autumn lights, how trhey swirl the leaves in the wind of magical currwents, let there be movement, and there was
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