Sliding forward, leaning back, sinking lower,
inside, silence screams, my eyes close,
blood echoes “whoomp whoomp” through my head,
a pulsating steady base, breathing slows.
Water seeps into my eyes, I sink down
yearning for the rushing cave, I drown.
Author notes
Picture - http://www.deviantart.com/print/1204567/
"Displaced" by `larafairie
A contest entry
- Blow Me! by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended May 2, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow
I can tell this contest is going to hard to judge! This poem screams dark and anger. Thanks for entering!
~Kystal Angel
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Oh a little morbad in a way.. But I like it! You did a great job with the prompt. Your words brought it to life.. Bravo.. Best of luck..
Angel
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