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Dribbles





I'm a slime oozing out
from a television.

Obey me, while I lead
digest faded garbage,
no help either, nothing to heed
completely in control
stuffed according mold,
do as told
your rights sold
dribbles from video
echoing in room.

No way to stop me,
only can play back.







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Prompt: " Play-Back"

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  • Purush
    May 1, 2008
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    oh! good verse neatly worded
    All the best in my contes