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Projection of Pain In 3-D

Your love sent me
from real to reeling,
rewinding our short
film of tears
from happy beginning
to tragic end.
Without final credits,
no chance to find
purchase in your
arms again.
I'm broke,
the pockets
of my soul emptied,
I sit in longing
and playback
the wonders of you.

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  • Purush
    May 1, 2008

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    All the best in my contest

    oh! lovely!
    love has a magic spell
    Despair or delight, it plays free.
    you have reeled out a real situation in cinematic way
    All the best in my contest