Please, play back the days of yesteryear
Full of happiness and joy
When very seldom was there a tear
Just happiness for a girl and boy
Time seemed slower in those days
Neighbors had time to sit and talk
Just enjoying a lovely evening
Or going for an evening walk
Author notes
50 words exactly.
A contest entry
- Quickie--Word prompt by Purush.
450 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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A LOVELY VERSE WITH living situation,duly worded
with all texture neatly woven
All the best in my contest -
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Thank You Purush
For the Silver Trophy and your kind comment on my poem....Katie
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Love This!
Yes, Amen, Let Us Go Back To Enjoying Each-Other And The Simple Things In Life! I So Agree With You My Friend.. Thanks For Shedding Some Light On Us All.
Peace, Timothy Aka Poeticweaver~


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Thanks Tim
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. It's true. The time seemed to pass much slower. Of course I miss the family gatherings. We all live so far apart today....Katie
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