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Play Back Yesteryear

Please, play back the days of yesteryear
Full of happiness and joy
When very seldom was there a tear
Just happiness for a girl and boy

Time seemed slower in those days
Neighbors had time to sit and talk
Just enjoying a lovely evening
Or going for an evening walk

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  • Purush
    May 1, 2008

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    A LOVELY VERSE WITH living situation,duly worded
    with all texture neatly woven
    All the best in my contest


    • Katie Lazette
      May 5, 2008
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      Thank You Purush

      For the Silver Trophy and your kind comment on my poem....Katie


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    Love This!

    Yes, Amen, Let Us Go Back To Enjoying Each-Other And The Simple Things In Life! I So Agree With You My Friend.. Thanks For Shedding Some Light On Us All. Peace, Timothy Aka Poeticweaver~


    • Katie Lazette
      May 1, 2008
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      Thanks Tim

      I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. It's true. The time seemed to pass much slower. Of course I miss the family gatherings. We all live so far apart today....Katie