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Green spring

I waited for autumn
it bashed me with fallen leaves

I desired cold winter
it slashed me with snow packs

I wished to be in green spring
it greeted me with needed breathings

Spring always sprouts wishes in me

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  • SuicidalLover
    May 2, 2008

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    Ok....I don't know about this. I'm not that good at understanding this poem. Sorry. I wanted angry and dark. Is this what it is? Well thanks for entering nonetheless.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • righteousme
    May 1, 2008

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    loved it... and the last line " spring always sprouts wishes in me " ... reminds me of childhood... or empty boxes needing to be filled... well, you have a nice spring... blessed days...