A tiny
dainty comb
carved with birds and flowers
and the hearts
of men
A tiny
dainty smile
flashing temptation at
the watching
stars
With
A tiny
dainty hand
she beckons them fall
from the
sky
A tiny
dainty laugh
as the sky goes black
and the comb
glows.
Author notes
I actually like this one, but don't let that deter you - I still want critiques, if you'll give them.
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