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A vision of loveliness

floats across the room,

wisps of fine hair

curl around porcelain eyes.

 

 

A gentle smile curves

the corners of her mouth,

such delicate features

of fragile demeanour.

 

 

From this fine figure

of slender daintiness,

deep blue eyes

hold a depth,

yet unexplored.

 

 

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Prompt - Hour Glass
10 to 50 words more or less

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  • Malabu
    May 21, 2008
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    sounds like every mans dream...and you have weaved curves of a woman with an hour glass shape...filled it with desire...and time drips in passing...waiting to be spent...lovely poem to delight the senses...thank you for entering this supple delight
    Mal


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 2, 2008

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    Oh I just love this!! You have such talent.. this works perfectly for that prompt!


  • sunflowers21573
    May 1, 2008

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    This was breathtaking and I really enjoyed reading it. Great job on the prompt. Good luck in the contest