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Excursion


clearly Descartes thought
that the very act proved it.
but that's recursive.

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Haiku.

Gomen ne, watashi wa, haiku ga kakimasendeshita, soshite chotto...

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  • B Chandler silver member
    May 16

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    If you were to drop the period, seeing how it serves no true purpose, then the write would flow better not having the period there to act as a speedbump

  • yumanbeing
    May 3

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    clever

    I love Senru/Haiku form, and you created a wonderful cascade of ideas with 12 words -
    Now I will go and look up the word recursive


  • azure85 gold member
    May 1

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    clearly Descartes thought
    that the very act proved it.
    but that's recursive.

    A very interesting haiku based on the prompt, and one which a persoon could contemplate alot on. Thank you so much!


    • cherylline
      May 2
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      Thanks for the comment! It's an intriguing contest idea...there's no end of things you can say about doubt, heh. Hope you enjoy reading all the entries!