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Boundless


spiritualism is harmony
with everything in right place
a rose of smooth petals
smoothly laid on one other

beauty emits
others can take delight
send the fragrance
without despise or favor

frictionless force
movement infinite


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  • Samplette gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    A nicely written piece of poetry. Well crafted. Thank you for entering the contest, enjoyed the read.
    Sam