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Desires

Fatal desires haunting the mind,
A life so unwilling it leaves you behind,
Where paitents is broken,
Where shards wearing thin,
Where silence is stolen,
Where this breaks the skin.
And when bled dry wonder if you'll be forgiven.

A contest entry

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  • D.s
    May 8, 2008
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    woooo, yet another work of art mate, well done =]


  • SuicidalLover
    May 2, 2008
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    Oh...nice. This says angry in subtle ways. Thanks so much for entering.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • Angelflower
    May 2, 2008

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    Huh! This was a really interesting take on the prompt! I really enjoyed it too.. The image that your words creat went well with it.. Well done and the best of luck to you...

    Angel