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Willow Weeper

When it rains, I see your face in the slightest trace of rain weeping from the willow.
Cry so hard till it all runs out without doubt for the pain from the willow.
As the tears, like rain, fall down the height of the tall willows years.
Washing away is the hate through the gates of the willows fears.
When the sun comes out tomorrow, let it evaporate the sorrow till its gone.
Cover the history of the past but do it fast before someone sees.

Weep willow, forever may you cry for the life's you've seen, the lives you let die in the fire, take another.
Weep for yourself, for not being able to help the rescuer, you couldn't save her from the fire, leave a light on for you.

Border the once tempted love, feel it shove at you, never get through.
The last forever has faded, with time were jaded, and you feel it too.
Lumps of the past recover, we trip over, reliving the darkness once away.
Swept under the rug, we clear the past away.

Weep willow, forever may you cry. The life's you've seen have all now died in the fire that burns forever.
Weep for me for not being able to rescue her. It's my fault, I could have saved her from the fire of dark desire.

Willow weep as you see your last night and watch the last die.
Put out the light and give up the fight with the fire. Take another, willow weeper.

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  • iamlost gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    I like the ideas in this especially, as well as a lot of the wording. It's a little repetitive in places, but it kind of adds to the tone and rhythm of the poem. Thanks for the entry.