Wandering
further than
most,
my mind
gets lost.
Questioning
para normal
spiritual,
religious
beliefs.
Stretching
my imagination
to it's outer
limits,
finding none.
Snapping
back to reality
summoned by
someone
else’s energy.
A contest entry
- Take Some Points From Me by iamlost.
1070 points, ended May 1, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love how this poem works with the title so well. I also love how each stanza starts with an ing verb, it makes the action very strong. I love the idea of this as well, it's very well conveyed. Thanks for the entry!
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