Drowning in the pit of despair,
Blinded, damning emotions!
Anger boils within, turning acid..
Words of hurt and despise settle
Deep,waiting for that perfect moment to let lose,
Hatred in a cloud of poisoned smoke..
.....For you....
Author notes
Prompt icture
20 poets
40 words (NO MORE THAN)
Words: 38
Picture - http://www.deviantart.com/print/1204567/
"Displaced" by `larafairie
A contest entry
- Blow Me! by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended May 2, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow
Blow me sure is this poem! I mean damn. This dark and some what angry. The angry is there, just masked by the pain. Thanks for entering!
~Kystal Angel
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SO, SO SAD!!!
Such despair in your words! I can picture the lady thinking exactly this.
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I hope that, though sad, it means that you still like it uncle!! ...
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love the ending. The picture was also a great piece.
....for you....
wow really well done
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Thank you very much I'm glad that you liked it.
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Dark
Very good take on this prompt. you captured it so well. Best of luck in this contest my friend.
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Wow, icy with a sting! Loving this, you really nailed the prompt! All the best in the contest
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Thank you very much!! I'm glad that you liked it!!
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excellent...love the cold words...well done..
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad you liked it.
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