My lover died in an accident
My mind unable to grasp the realization,
that he can't come back
Slowly drowning in my pool of sorrows
I close my eyes
Even in thought, he still manages to take my breath away
Author notes
Picture - http://www.deviantart.com/print/1204567/
"Displaced" by `larafairie
A contest entry
- Blow Me! by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended May 2, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This took my breath away. Its so sad yet lovely. I really like this.
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you should have got a trophie
i really liked this
and the pic goes great with the whole thing
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This is such a sad write =[ I love it though, and the imagery used is just amazing. Once again, great work! x
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wow.
that was REALLY good.
i was seriously impressed.
great job! i enjoyed that.
aj -
wow, i love your take on the prompt. and i love your last line especially. a great piece, i love it
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Wasn't the angry I was looking for, but sweet in heart. Nice take on the prompt. I thank you for entering.
~Kystal Angel
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This is a really good take on this prompt hun..
I really liked it.. Best of luck..
Jetleena
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Loving it..!
Xx
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