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Forgotten Memories

Missing image
Walking outside
She spots a mesmerizing turquoise flower

Suddenly like a jolt
Pushed down memories from a lover long passed come back

Remembering this flower, the last thing he gave her before he died
A single tear is shed

The hole inside, now filled

In a list

A contest entry

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  • JaydeD
    May 10
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    =O *gasp*
    that was really uber good
    congrats on the green NOT GAY trophie lol

  • EternallyEternity
    May 2

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    i like it. beautiful flow and poem. how do you always convey so much emotion?!? beautiful. good luck

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 2

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    oh.. this was really interesting.. I like it!!the flow was nice and your words did justice to the prompt! well done.. best of luck.

  • CharcoalScreams
    May 2

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    I love the last few kick lines of ur poems. They always give out the most emotion. Thanks for sharing this with us xxx
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