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Beauty Is All That Counts

They say beauty is all that counts
What if all the mirrors broke
Our eyes shut permanently
How could beauty mean anything anymore
We'd have to see with our souls
Find that beauty within
Use our intuition to guide us
Perhaps friends would be true friends
Lovers true soul mates
In the end maybe beauty is all that counts

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    A good write. Heartfelt and thought provoking. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Good closing lines. Well done.


  • Perception
    May 7, 2008

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    Very interesting take on the prompt... Good job too - this is a very interesting concept... You keep me thinkin k?
    Good job,
    and best of luck in the contest