There is something I need to tell you
it's what I did today
I asked someone to help you
This is what I had to say
You know in the past I've hated you
Blamed you for it all
I come to you now in peace
This girl has taken a fall
I don't ask you any questions
or blame you for all the lies
please will you help her
I think she is going to die
If I need faith for this then I will
forget the past and its hell
do help her now I pray
for there is nothing I wont pay
Take my heart and my soul
my life is yours to hold
take her pain away right now
& strength to over power
She cries and is so hurt
There is nothing I can do to help her
please go to her now
show her that you love her
Tell her its all OK
wipe her tears away
heal her broken heart &
Strength to make it today
You owe her is one you know
She always believe in you
her I am just praying
That this time you will pull through.
Author notes
I know I just took your breath away, put the holy water away guys lol. I really did this today, lets hope it works.
Much Luv Sis
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This is good. I don't care if it's different from your norm or not. I have written one's about religion and praying as well. I really like this. It shows what you would do to help someone. Keep it up!
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wo0o0ow i love this this is soooo deep.
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wow loved this. kinda personal
i like.
oh and your page was great
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What if I don't want to put th eholy water away?!
Couldn't help it, Sorry.
I spotted a few spelling eorros, but other than that this is wonderful.
dye - Die.
Have a good day, my lovelie older sister. ♥
iloveyou.
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nice job you did good. i liked the part that said "You owe her is one you know
She always believe in you
her I am just praying
That this time you will pull through."
i like the way you put imagry into this poem good job and keep writitng
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Amazing write my dear wife form start to finish truly amazing you have a lot of talent Christina and you are just going to grow more and more as a writer
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