Grains fighting against the current of Chronos
But paralysis is impossible around those habits
Old times were always better for trilobites
But nowadays' worms accelerate the timing
Sand is not enough; time flows like mosquitoes now
Author notes
"Hour glass" <- Used as a prompt, although I'm more than putting the opposite.
A contest entry
- Hour Glass by Malabu.
525 points, ended May 23, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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like where you took this...outside the box also...very intelligent poem too...thinking back...time seems to have moved fast...yet today the now...thoughts can draw flies..comes to my mine..I like this poem
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