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Anchor

I weep a river of frozen tears
cascading down they shatter
into a billion fragments of harsh light
blinding those who dare
to gaze upon their beauty.

They shimmer with splendor
as I fade to blissful silence.
heart to ice
mind to fire
thoughts to vengeance.

The last falls to settle amongst it's comrades
before my eyes, it soaks in
fades to dust
and leaves no evidence of it's passing.

I remain
lost in a swirl of emotion
trapped by my convictions
and anchored by my rage.

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  • VerminVomit
    May 1, 2008

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    wow

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
    EVERYTHING IS SO AWESOME. WAIT NO, LORDLY!!!
    *ADDS TO FINALIST LIST*
    THE SECOND STANZA IS THE MOST OUTSTANDING
    THANK YOU FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST