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Adrenaline Shock

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As excitement trips synaptic traps, taps inner ocean tide
Deep within the spirit calling to the hidden beast inside,
Rising quicker, swifter falling, masterminding, unpoliced,
Electricity internal surges, impulse shocks released.
Now accept an opportunity for challenge set aside,
As hunter spies through camouflage a prey too long denied.
Listen as the heart beats faster – who is hunter, who is fleeced ?
Is one servant, is one master, must it matter in the least ?
New conundrum through the ear drum, sounding board plumbs, Fate defied.

Enterprising and surprising, tingles jingle far and wide,
SHed all hesitation information channelled, need to feast –
Open ended this excitement as the blood count is increased.
Cause, effect can come together as their patterns superpose
Kneading, feeding, seeding needing more than many may suppose...

 

 

 

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  • Wow this is really cool! First off I love acrostic poems! You did a fine job using this form Secondly, the rhyme is awesome, I like rhyme poems as well, tho I am not so good at them lol!

    "Rising quicker, swifter falling, masterminding, unpoliced,
    Electricity internal surges, impulse shocks released."
    -- My favorite lines

    Amber
  • It seems everywhere I go on AP I've been running into your poems! lol. This is a really neat poem and you capture the very essence so well!

  • iamlost gold member
    May 1

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    This is lovely, I enjoyed reading your acrostic, especially how the rhythm and rhyming work with it. Wonderful wording and diction, thank you for taking me into this world of adrenaline.