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Unforgiving Insights

Among the words of a rock-a-bye hushed lullaby,

And of the silent, teary-eyed faced girl,
There's a world unseen.

A world...
Tormented
And
Revengeful
In many ways,

Allows nothing in,
Thus letting nothing out.
Reality is the name,
And goes it on, mercilessly.

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  • Tawni Risley silver member
    May 3, 2008
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    Beautiful

    This is amazing, dark, and heartfelt. But alas, very true.

    I love it.

    Tawni


  • Angelflower
    April 30, 2008

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    I really liked the way you wrote this..You let me see a little bit of you but then again you just change it in the end.. well done! I really enjoyed reading this..

    Angel