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A Dove For Peace

From the day of creation
Through the present
Mankind has sought to see destruction
But our innermost emotion
For protection of all that is of beauty
Will seek peace of everlasting proportion
The eyes of a child shall lead
But the peace of humanity
The protection of humanity
Will be the brightness of hope
And the desire of strength
Will fly with the most beautiful bird
And it will be----
------------A Dove For Peace

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Ghandi's words of wisdom is indeed true. Everyone must do their share of keeping the Earth healthy and keep humanity honest.
I am not sure if this meets the contest's criteria.

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  • Desire gold member
    May 2, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: A Dove For Peace
    This piece tugged at Spirit and the message regarding
    the eyes of a child...speaks volumes...
    I am being shown how there are negative energies
    that try to come around You and infiltrate...
    yet feeling You focus on what Your mother said...
    what Your father said...they have raised You
    in such a manner...I'm seeing...
    her words...run through Your veinsj
    along with his~~
    Doves may have taken to the skies
    but their message, their legacy stays with You
    You make a difference even if at times it may not
    feel like it~~
    Powerful images to touch deep

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    The eyes of a child shall lead
    But the peace of humanity
    The protection of humanity
    Will be the brightness of hope.
    Beautiful take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • smiley
    May 1, 2008
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    Loved It

    weather you met the critera, it was a job of truth well done.

    Yvonne

  • U.g.l.y.
    April 30, 2008

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    It sure meets the contest's criteria and what not, and although the thought isn't necessarily shared by me, it's beautifully worded, although... you should restrain yourself to 10 lines and not more, like the contest says.

    • rgrpaperboy
      April 30, 2008
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      Can I ask you, what does more or less mean? That was in the parenthesis.