Daffodils and hyacinth
Prelude Dogwoods presence
While the Redbud
Tease of impending beauty
As on Angels wings
Spring descends
Once more
At winters end
A contest entry
- Take Some Points From Me by iamlost.
1070 points, ended May 1, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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In a word..gorgeous. I swear you write so beautiful.
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Thanks again for your valued time in reading and commenting......
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"Tease of impending beauty"
I love these lines, they are quite wonderful, as is this entire poem. I like this poem as well, especially how it ties into your other entry.
I love how you've given me two aspects of nature in these two pieces, this glimpse of spring is quite beautiful.
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Thank so much for your kind comment and for stopping by.
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Your poem has a spring scent to it, smilelol and good luck in the contest
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Spring is a good season. It seems to me to represent a new start. A time to forget the past cold harshness and move forward in a new begining. Thankyou for your time in reading and your supportive comments.
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