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Our Love (Collaboration: Poeticweaver)

Your smile shines brightly in sweet night skies...
Dear lover friend I gaze deep in your eyes...
I embrace your heart and do fantasize..
To cuddle with you, and hear your soft sighs..

Your precious lips brushing against my cheek...
Wiping away tears that painfully seep
Eyes closed tightly, I draw portraits of we
My love, is your love, and that’s destiny

In heaven above, we’ll soar upon wings
But now we sing hymns, and talk about things
For I cherish you, and you treasure me
As we weave so gently our poetry

 

Amazing how your words drift like a dream

And wounds from the past, this weaver will seam

 

Author notes

Once Again Timothy thank you for the honor of writing with you.
Always a pleasure penning with the better half of my soul.

Read him hes great:
http://allpoetry.com/poeticweaver
Love ya hon

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    June 22

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    BEAUTIFUL


    What a beautiful collab you two have written.It oozes with passion and devotion.the reader can feel the emotions that you both have weaved into this write.i think this would have to be the best love poem that i have ever read, it made me feel good inside,I could feel the love that radiates between you to soul mates, and when I can feel the emotions of a poem, then in my oppinion it is a great write, and this my friend, your poem has done for me.Wonderful images within your written words.You both have been a real pleasure to read and i am going to put you on my favs list, so i don't miss a single post of yours.
    Take care and be blessed,
    Your friendly angel,
    ~Angel~


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      June 22
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      Thanks so much we appreciate your loyal reading. I have always enjoyed blending ink with poeticweaver and it just seems to keep getting better.

      Much love

      poeticweaver & Passionspromise

  • Griswold
    May 1

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    Wonderfully done you two, you do blend ink very well. An excellent job between you two indeed. Love you baby...Scott


  • Sanguinarius gold member
    May 1

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    This is great, and holy $**t, I checked out poeticweavers page and found "Weeping Shadows Linger Silently", this absolutely blew me away. ~Bret~


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      May 1
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      He is an awesome poet and my ultimate half of my soul. The only one I knew long enough that hadnt hurt me and ran away. We appreciate you reading us, and I appreciate you reading my work tonight. Your pretty awesome to my dear.

      Passions

  • Asdzaa Nadleehe silver member
    May 1

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    Sighs....So nice to see such beauty shared between two.
    You both should be very proud of this amazing piece..
    Smiles
    Many blessings to you both!
    ~A~


  • Lady Altheia
    May 1

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    This is so lovely and flowed so well, you can't tell which one did which verses. The best of luck to both of you in your future writing endeavors.

  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 1
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    You two get better and better at writing together, it is wonderful to watch and enjoy.


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 1

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    wow this weaver guy mom he is a great match for you.
    i think you two are a very romantic writing couple.
    it was really magical mom

    Darius


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 30

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    Thanks Victorious!

    You are a joy to pen with sweet soul!
    It is my honor to share ink with you.
    Much love and light V~ -Timothy

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