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Scorned

Catch my tears
upon your evil hands
for they are cried in vengeance

May they scorch
the very core of your heart
as your lies have done to mine

Hell's wrath
shall feel like mercy
for I vow, you will welcome death

Be not forgetful
of the scars you placed upon my being
forever let them haunt your memory

You left your mark
deep down inside of me
vengeance will be mine
                      forevermore.

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I have no idea where this came from..

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  • I think I can guess where it might have come from. You have done a good job with this. Best of luck in the contest.


  • iamlost gold member
    May 1, 2008
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    Wow. Wow. This is amazing.

    "Hell's wrath
    shall feel like mercy
    for I vow, you will welcome death"

    Beautiful, the title ties into this and creates a dark perfection. I love the emotion and wording throughout this, you've truly given me a wonderful entry, thank you!