The sun on the horizon
slowly tiptoes across the meadows
and begins it's rise upon the day
to set hearts a light and dreams free
solitary moments being captured
under the brightness of a freshness anew
tiny rainbows spill light from left-over dew.
Tiny, little water pixies laugh as they bathe
in psychedelic kaleidoscope pools refracting
Many rays of sunlight into a beautiful prismatic rainbow
A lover sighs deep to diffuse in the hue-full ribbon
a vision of refracted dreams, desires.
The pride and prowess of all the god's empire
Within grasp of the eager, adventuring heart
Author notes
A collaborative poem!!! My line is:
"Within grasp of the eager, adventuring heart"
A contest entry
- World Collaboration Poem-Add A Line by 2lullabyhaven.
725 points, ended May 22, 2008, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your line fits in beautifully with the rest of this collaboration, I love the imagery and emotion in it. It feels a bit strange to comment on one line, but I'll see it as a short poem in the midst of the rest of the beauty, a petal that definitely enhances the rose.
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I love this...
So many wonderful lines..
A beautiful write thus far..I look forward to its end...smiles
many blessings
~A~
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Ooo, I love it...eager, adventuring heart. wow thanks
and good lucklol
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