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Snow

Integrate patterns
Gently fall from above
Each so unique
Only from God’s hand
Could they be
Creatures great and small
Huddle in wonder
As their realm of contrast
Disappears under a blanket
Of uniform purity and color
Lingering with majestic beauty
A world so uniquely diverse
Is transformed
If but for a while

Into one

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Thoughts of a winter morn-

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  • iamlost gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    "As their realm of contrast
    Disappears under a blanket
    Of uniform purity and color"

    This is beautiful, I love the ideas you're giving through this, that a winter storm can turn all the world to one. Amazing ideas, wonderfully conveyed, plus beautiful diction, makes one superb poem! Thank you for this entry!


    • Rclane gold member
      May 1, 2008
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      Thank you for time. I spend a lot of time thinking and never really know where I'll end up. Shame it isn't this easy to have the world on the same page......


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    How beautiful this is. I entered this one as well, but boy did I go in a totally different direction lol Very nicely done.

    • Rclane gold member
      April 30, 2008
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      Thank you.....Didn't slip on the snow did you