It's not just that the sand is being diminished;
It's also about my life's work getting finished.
Is it just about what's now being taken from me?
Can't it not also be about what's being aged completely?
The wrap up usually comes somewhere near the end, right?
And the end of one page is only that page's delight.
A contest entry
- Hour Glass by Malabu.
525 points, ended May 23, 2008, 17 entries
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we are forever chasing rainbows...and we find time runs through a slim shaped tube...sometimes what we achieve in a short time is not enough in our minds..question to me...do we really need to accomplish all that we dream...
thank you for your entry
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Good question, perhaps not, but; should we not continue the process of reaching? smile
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Ian, work through this, all's welllol
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in the hour of your words here you most certainly dont waist any seconds expressing your feelings good luck to you like your energy
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Energy is right...thankslol
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