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Silver - My Profit

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Silver - My Profit
The car I was selling,
was haunted, and God knew it.

So he threw down
his breakfast muffin, and squished it.

Thank goodness that he sent the Ghost to Hell,
but there goes my profit.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    Oh my

    This was interesting indeed he does have his ways of making things better


  • isabelwk
    May 1, 2008
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    Great!

    I love the imagery in this piece. Hahaha. Threw down his muffin. That's a great line.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 30, 2008

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    LOL! Either way you lose!
    Great work with this picture prompt.
    Thanks a lot for entering and good
    luck to you! I appreciate it!




    Jeremy0826