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Stuck in despair

Will it ever end
This feeling of forgotteness
Will it ever end
this feeling of hopelessness
Will it ever end
this feeling
this indescribable feeling
Will it ever end
will there ever be a way out
Will i be stuck in here forever
Stuck with no hope of being happy
Stuck with no hope of everything being good
Will i ever find a way to happiness
Will i ever find a way to believe again

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  • crazymomma
    May 8
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    I love the way the flow adds to the feel of desperation in this poem.

  • approachingdrizzle
    May 1

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    Awesome!

    I love the repetition and rhythm of this piece. No spelling mistakes, no grammer to spot a mistake in. I love the structure and concept of this piece.


  • iamlost
    May 1

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    The questions in this are deep and touching, this entire poem is amazing. I love what you've given it, the wording and ideas are beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this, keep writing.