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Cakewalking

Cake-walking at the fair,
Cake in your ears!
Cake in your hair!

Round cakes, big cakes!
Lemon meringue cake!

Fancy ladies with peacock hats,
Tiny tots laying on their mats.

Watching people;
Smashing and mashing,
Dashing and crashing.

All for that stupid, yummy cake.

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This really isn't all that great. Still, it brings a smile to my face when I think back on all the people running into each other to get that last cake...

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  • papercut
    July 3, 2008

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    Cute!

    I laughed when I read this =) Like, out loud. I work in a bakery - I definitely have witnessed women fighting over cake! haha Well done =)