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Mirrored

If all souls alive
Loved each other without reservation,
Forever--
We might understand you,
Lord.

Let the love that embraces
Universes
Fill us with regard
For all who tread this path.

For the deepest, most humbling truth
Is union with you,
Outpouring our love as you
Outpour yours.
We are mirrored in each other.

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  • parenchma
    May 29, 2008
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  • parenchma
    May 29, 2008
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    Mirrors, and yet each relationship to God
    is like snowflake

    fingerprint

    unique


  • Ladybug
    May 13, 2008

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    if we were bold enough to stand up and love one another this would be another world for certain, if only we would.

    a beautiful inspiration
    great metaphor and flow
    I believe it deserves a silver medal

    Tamara


  • Patpowers silver member
    May 12, 2008
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    Beautiful work with this! I can tell this was an honorable winner! GOOD JOB!

  • baghdaelf
    May 4, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    It's beautiful.


  • Over and Done
    May 4, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    Very true. We are all a reflection of each other and created in the image of the Creator. Thank you for your offering of prayer. Good luck in the contest.

    God Bless
    Tammy
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    • Aerden gold member
      May 4, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the honorable mention! I am glad you enjoyed the poem.


  • Sgt B
    May 1, 2008
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    Christ IS love

    Isn't it sad how mankind has been ingrained with love but they choose to ignore it and literally run over people for themselves? Pride is a real killer. Our children are getting brained washed by TV. Self promote and "I'm the best" Your poem really hit home on one of my soap box stands so I better stop.
    Great poem I really enjoyed it.

    ~Ron~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    Powerful..

    Love, Love, Love. You have penned a beauty of truth!
    Thanks for sharing your amazing heart and soul here.
    All the best within the contest, peace to you and yours!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • iamlost gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    Oooh, I love that last line! This is beautiful, I love the ideas and hope in this poem. I enjoyed reading this, you lifted my heart.

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