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Listening to Music

Flowing through the untouched veins with shivering beauty
Like a soft kiss, with an electric aftershock
The backbone of it pounding through
Arising sadness
The subtle undertones like the spring rain
Pulling you into a world of clarity
Smooth but jagged lyrics cutting to the quick
Leaving the victim scarred and broken
Yet renewed
Unable now to die.

Author notes

I'm a die-hard music fan (meaning, of course, only real music, like rock. That's about it).

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  • Perception
    May 7, 2008

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    oooo very nice job... This is very interesting how you wove music into your piece... Very nice job.
    Best of luck in my contest...
    Good poem