The warm summer waters
Run still
Along the sandy shores
A contest entry
- Just so quick by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 30, 2008, 9 entries
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Short but not diminished in stature, this spikes images of a peaceful summers day on a sheltered bay. Where the water gently washes the shore while children sway in the undulation of the waters edge and others create castles to fend off there enemy's. An ice cream van beckons you with its siren of green sleeves, while dad's slumber unrecognizable under a layer of sand and sunscreen. very summery lol
Cyber Artist
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It's a quick write but you still get the point of reference
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this is summer
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"Run still" a bit weird... But beautiful imagery however. I love what you describe - so peaceful... Wonderful.
Best of luck in your contest!
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Beautifully captivating... x
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