Regret: what
I didn't do
Could've done.
Choking in the ribbon of
remorse
I made myself
strangling me in every step I take
forward
not looking back.
The second-thoughts
Epimethsus at his work,
the epilouge of my own novel
not what I had planned.
Clinging to the last grasps of reality and plunging
into something
deeper than it should be.
Seeing what could've been changed
by a mere action,
is only thing
that could've stopped this whole thing
from ever happening.
Author notes
Idk what this is, I just let the words play on the page a little. It might need fixing up...
Should I expand the end?
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good it mi leigh
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I agree with that the ribbon thing should be on because it's around your neck. OTHER then that I have no two cents. I think I like this one the most of anything you've written.
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great use of imagery. i liked this. but i would suggest that on the line "Choking in the ribbon of remorse", that you should change the "in" to "on". Other than that, nicely penned.
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love it
great reference to epimetheus! not many people kno about him. definitely captures the spirit of regret. great emotion and strength. this is an excellent emotion poem!
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why thank u hannah =]
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oops forgot the clappys!
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I really like this poem it has a lot of emotion ot it and strong words
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OoOooOoO I love the line "choking on the ribbon of remorse" hehe i'm a sucker for imagery
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lol
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