Entire world
seems to swirl down
akin your sinking heart.
Tears make beautiful eyelashes
their heavenly abode,
another trial of life
set for you,
when you thought
there was a drought for them-
a naive deduction;
yet each
is another cut on our diamond,
there is a light
somewhere
waiting to shine on us,
we just have to search the light
in our patience and prayers.
Author notes
• "You may encounter many defeats, but you must not be defeated. In fact, it may be necessary to encounter the defeats, so you can know who you are, what you can rise from, how you can still come out of it."
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A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
2100 points, ended June 22, 15 entries
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I do like your poem that you hav edone here thank you very much for taking the time to enter best wishes and much luck always
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I need to find that light I think... you have expressed that prompt beautifuly.. this write really touched my heart!
(is the first word in line 9 suppose to be "there" instead of "they"?)
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Thanks for pointing out the typo...We all need to find the light...one thing is for certain..there is light...
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"Tears make beautiful eyelashes"
This is wonderful, I love it. Each line is filled with beauty and hope, I really enjoyed reading this.
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Glad you enjoyed it so much and got the message...
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yeah I know this very sad feeling...good write.
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Thank you....we all face it sometimes...
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Great write we are like cut diamonds.
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Sure are..just going with the flow of my thoughts...I keep wondering how much more of cutting is thee, till I realize lief is all about cutting I guess with just rest in middle...
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suilts it auntie
pretty -
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Thank dear...many
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wowie auntie
this is really great
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Really ..so glad you like it...many
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