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Perception

Perception
the ability to see
past my desire
to know
how beautiful
you truly are
beneath the silken skin
that hides
the heart
I love

A contest entry

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  • Malick66
    May 7, 2008

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    Nice!

    Very good, I love it. Short and snappy poems which leave you thinking are my favourtite. Best of luck in the comp :-)