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Hope

Eyes closed, wide awake

Mouth shut, lips screaming

Arms resting, Hands choking

Legs still, feet running

I dream, I dream,
cannot escape.

The pain I've caused,
the hurt my blame.

I'm sorry, I'm sorry
forever, today.

I see a smile
hope remains!

A contest entry

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  • Kooks
    May 1, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry. The description of the darkness was beautifully thought out.

    Good luck in the contest


  • MelodiousDreaming
    April 30, 2008
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    Wonderful!

    This is very good!