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I Love You

Words softly murmur
Off your pouted lips
Caressing my ears
With such a fragile presence

Each word
Rushes into my soul
Wrapping my heart
With loves embrace

Three simple words
A million meanings


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  • Perception
    May 7, 2008
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    Very simple; yet very beautiful!
    Wonderful job
    and best of luck


  • iamlost gold member
    April 30, 2008

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    "Three simple words
    A million meanings"

    This is amazing, a depth of emotion that is amazing to find in these few lines. Wonderful.