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Without You

If I could write a letter
It would be addressed to you
And if I could send a special package
You'd have my heart with all its love true

But something is in the way
A barrier
A wall
I decided to climb it, to find you
Only I fear I've begun to fall

My heart aches
And my brain wakes
To find nothing in return
An I've been looking all around
But all that is left
Is a scar, a burn

And i know there's nothing left for me
for you
You're as good as gone
And now I know its true

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  • EmptyBrokenDreams
    May 1, 2008

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    ummmm..............you suck....not...im bored...i hate the poem...not...i hate u....not....okay...bye


  • Leech
    May 1, 2008
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    dayum! this is really good! i like this a lot.