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vaccine

behind their masks, they
have no mouths;

whomever injected life
into me before i became
innocent
used stones to open
my eyes (and i watched).


between my eyes,
i am samson
until you tie me down.
i'm all pins
but no needles.



they have no vaccine
for normalcy.

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Aichmophobia.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 1, 2008

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    hmmm, I can definately relate to this one on many levels, though I don't have this fear myself my ex boyfriend and present boyfriend actually have this fear themselves so I have been around many who do.


  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    April 30, 2008

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    "whomever injected life
    into me before i became
    innocent
    used stones to open
    my eyes (and i watched)."

    i absolutely love this.
    it gave me tingles.
    brilliant!


  • autarky
    April 30, 2008

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    dark...

    ...but really good, by the way. you're getting better and better when i thought it impossible. =]