behind their masks, they
have no mouths;
whomever injected life
into me before i became
innocent
used stones to open
my eyes (and i watched).
between my eyes,
i am samson
until you tie me down.
i'm all pins
but no needles.
they have no vaccine
for normalcy.
Author notes
Aichmophobia.
A contest entry
- Phobia - What's Yours? by xxRainbowDawnxx.
433 points, ended May 1, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critique:
Comments
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hmmm, I can definately relate to this one on many levels, though I don't have this fear myself my ex boyfriend and present boyfriend actually have this fear themselves so I have been around many who do.
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"whomever injected life
into me before i became
innocent
used stones to open
my eyes (and i watched)."
i absolutely love this.
it gave me tingles.
brilliant!
♥

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dark...
...but really good, by the way. you're getting better and better when i thought it impossible. =]




