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Left or the right?

Concentrating on the task at hand, I will do what I can
Obstacles in my way, I will look for a way around
Relying on my own abilities, I will use them fully.


I look around, planning my best course of attack
Left looks good to drive, but right is open
I drive forward taking the left lane, throw to the open right.


I duck out into the middle, awaiting the reaction of my attack from outside
The rock is released, arching its way to the hole
My eyes await for the bounce, my ears anxious for a noise to jump.


As the rock falls home, I look to my help
Congratulating him on a job well done as we fall back to defend
A feeling of satisfaction as my plan worked, executed perfectly.

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  • Nickey Mouse
    April 30, 2008
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    Wow. This is a good poem