Once upon a time
there was a pretty princess
that had a beautiful bed
but this princess was sad
she could not sleep at night
she thought something was very wrong
her bed was not as nice as she would like
so one night the queen called for someone
that was to make things better
and put a spell on the bed
but still she tossed and turned
she did not like her bed
it was not right for her
she rather sleep on the floor
Out in the barn there was alot of noise
and the King did not know what was wrong
the cow was crying and trying to talk
she did not like the bed that was there
she refused to lay down and the king was so sad
he did not know what to do
so when he got up to leave he saw a ribbion
that belonged to his daughter
he said what is that doing there
then he looked at the cow and saw
a tear going dwn her cheek
he knew then that his daughter
was turned into a barn animal
and he went straight away
to the wicked witch
and told her that she better make the switch back
and the mean nasty witch did
and the king threw the witch in jail
The End
A contest entry
- Twisted Fairy Tales by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended June 7, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest but don't be mean
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That mean old witch! Remind me not to piss her off because the last thing I want to be is someone's hamburger...
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This poem made me laugh I expected a fight from the wicked witch but hey some things should just stay simple and leave the complicated things out!! You did a great job!! Thanks for sharing!! Jess
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This is great darling good luck to you in this contest with your poem love you lots hope you have a beautiful day
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go genna
you saved the day
i love you baby -
I like this Genna! I like how the king get's his justice. Very creative. Thanks for the entry and I love you.
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