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Yearning Heart

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This desire of owning your heart,

it's eating me whole...

This stubborn love won't leave this idiot heart of mine alone....

Sub-estimated the situation and thought I had an opportunity...

Now I know, I was wrong again... Damn it!

 

I hate it when everything rounds back to the same old road...

This kills me, to watch it disolve off my hands...

Like water disolves the sand....

Now I know there's no remedy for this pain...

 

 

But honey, we'd make the perfect couple...

Even though I've only seen it in a dream...

 

This angst craves me to write you, to look for you...

But why? If you have an owner...

This stubborn heart won't let go from this idiot love I feel...

I have no future rights here, you're bounded and tied...

I guess I better give it up for now....

 

 

This heart yearns for one guy to prove,

that my time won't be wasted,

that my heart won't be divided,

that in fact I'll be excited,

When he shows me that not all guys are the same...

 

Keep yearning Heart.

maybe someday things will change...

       ~♥~

Author notes

"Why do I keep hanging from the nothing we'll never be."-XXVampireeyesXX

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  • crazymomma
    June 1, 2008

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    The pain and heartache is so obvious here. This is very good and powerful. You are very talented. I hope you keep writing forever.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 26, 2008
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    I truly feel for you...


  • HereComesTheSun
    May 25, 2008
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    great job


  • flyingphoenix
    May 22, 2008

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    Great write here, I really liked it.

    There is such feeling behind it and it shines through so well. It had great flow and rhythm, which made it more enjoyable to read.

    Some great imagery in there, I particually liked the second to last verse.

    The last two lines are nice, adding some hopefulness to the poem.

    Thanks for entering, and good luck!

    Sunny


  • crazymomma
    May 19, 2008
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    Wow! I really loved the simile of "water disolves the sand" and excellent imagery and metaphores throughout. Amazing!


  • Confuzzled1
    May 13, 2008

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    Very nice poem and u should find a guy that isn't like others cuz I am one hehe but yes very good write likeyed it yay!!! =)


  • XxUnforgiven-EmoxX
    May 1, 2008
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    Good.

    This poem is amazing... Its how i feel except kinda the other way around. But its still amazing.


  • FaeryMouse
    May 1, 2008

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    Are you living my Life or something girl....So far all your poems have been so for telling my life to the T.
    This heart yearns for one guy to prove,
    that my time won't be wasted,
    that my heart won't be divided,
    that in fact I'll be excited,
    When he shows me that not all guys are the same...
    That sums up my


  • Lonely Christina
    April 30, 2008

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    wow

    *clap clap* whoo-hoo amazing poem hunni. totally true feelings
    much love, christina

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