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You are my angel aaron

You are my angel Aaron,
you have shown me your greatful light.
You are my angel Aaron,
you have made those pesky butterflies go into flight.
You are my angel Aaron,
you were my life long love, just by sight.
You are my angel Aaron,
You have gotten my love to sore higher than a kite.
You are my angel Aaron!

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  • Perception
    April 30, 2008

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    Aw... You really do love him don't you
    This is beautiful... I can really feel your love coming from your words.
    Nice poem,
    and best of luck in your contest


  • BlackSwan
    April 30, 2008

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    Well you really know my style don't you?
    I absolutely LOVE that you used You to begin every line, that you ended every other line with Aaron or a rhyme.

    Aaron sounds like... an angel
    - thank you for your entry