Oh, how I've tried not to stare
but your beauty makes it so unfair
Here I stood rehearsing my line
All in attempt to make you mine
And as I admired from afar
your eyes shone brighter than any star
It was then I realized all I could do
was quit wasting time and go talk to you
For time is slipping as I fail to compare
your beauty to any sight or wonder anywhere
So with a heart sincere and full of bliss
I now end this poem with a rose and a kiss.
Author notes
attach stuff to the poem when you give it to her, girls like that stuff, I do it anonomously every year on V-day and thus have earned the nickname Mister Valentine.lol Oh and to the anyone who needs to write a love note, feel free to use this or contact me for help
A contest entry
- My deepest Feelings of within by Abner.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
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great
i really like this poem! gratz! -
aww this is really sweet and really romantic lmao! funny thing to say really... no wonder why your mr valentine... nicely done and congrats on gold!
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wow this is really good, mines more silly sounding compared to this.
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a cute poem! the rhyming is well done.
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superb... u r really amaze me I'm so delighted you entered this contest thanks you.
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