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Your Only One

I want to be your only one
But how can I be
When you push me away?

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Combination of a random thought and how much I wanted to write a love poem. I rather like it, what do you think?

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  • isabelwk
    May 7, 2008
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    Very nice

    E for effort! Well done.


  • BurnedImpulse
    May 4, 2008
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    Love it sis!
    and very true!


  • Twilight Moon
    May 2, 2008
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    exactly what ive been tryint o say !!! amazing


  • dragonsedge
    May 1, 2008
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    lol

    so do you have a specail some one?


  • Dlvvanzor
    May 1, 2008
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    Yep, yep, we can definately relate to that. Great write sis!

    -Dlvvanzor


  • EmmaLuLu
    May 1, 2008

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    short and meanigful btw the reason why my poem says ggg is because i hate to delete it for a reason...


    • Celticjedi
      May 1, 2008
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      You were gonna delete it? Oh I see...but how can I judge it in my contest when it's not there?


  • AllYoullNeverHave
    April 30, 2008

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    Short, sweet, and to the point. A very beautiful love poem. I rather like it too. I really enjoyed reading this, sis! It's a common feeling that a lot can relate to. Good job with this and I hope all is well with you! Love you!

    ♥♥Chelsea

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